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Monday, July 4, 2011

English Essay

Bismillah

Malaysia, is a country that is located in Southeast Asia. It consists of thirteen states and three federal territories. Divided by South China Sea, Malaysia is separated into two parts,Peninsular Malaysia and Malaysian Borneo. The name of Malaysia, has been used to refer the whole Malay Archipelago. Malaysia is a democratic country having Yang di-Pertuan Agong as the head of country and the Prime Minister as the head of government. The Prime Minister was being elected during General Election of Malaysia. Meanwhile, the Yang di-Pertuan Agong was chosen from the  rulers of 9 Malay states,taking turn in rotation. Malaysia is a unique country because it is multi -ethnic, multi -lingual and multi-cultural country. Malays, Chineses, Indians, Ibans and several other ethnic groups had made the population of Malaysia. Each groups have their own characteristics. That is the uniqueness of Malaysia. For examples, the Malays will have have their Hari Raya Puasa, the Chineses have their Chinese New Year and the Indians have their Deepavali  for their grand festival. In addition, each ethnic group have their own special cuisines and foods. If the Egyptians have basbussah and hadramaut, the Malaysians also have their own special cuisines. Ketupat, rendang, yong tau fu and capati, are some types of Malaysian's cuisines that are  not only delicious but also famous around the world. The official language of Malaysia is Bahasa Malaysia although other languages are also widely used such as English and Mandarin . Petronas Twin Towers and  Kuala Lumpur Tower are some examples of monuments that located in Malaysia. Petronas Twin Towers is one of the highest buildings in the world with 451 metres in height.  Furthermore, Malaysia have many beautiful and attr attractive tourism destinations. Every year, millions of people came to Malaysia for their holiday. Malaysia-Truly Asia.

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3 comments:

Anonymous said...

first line : located not locates,
second line: pandai plak tulis divided not divides....
third line : by south china sea should follow after divided..
line 6 : head of country..
races should be written as singular...

" Each groups have their own characteristics." this is wrong.. each groups refer as singular so the word 'their' is totally wrong..

That is the 'unique' of Malaysia.. uniqueness..

but also 'are' famous around the world.. omit are..

although other languages 'also are' widely used such as English .. are also..

'Petronas Twin Towers' "is" one of the highest buildings in the world with 451 metres in height.

Malaysia 'have'.. has

peoples.. since when people has an s???????

Anonymous said...

sorry kalau salah betulkan...

Dr. Syaef said...

terima kasih wahai anonymous :)

Kalau tahu siapa, memang dah belanja.